# ❄️ COLD OPEN — "DOCTOR SAROJA"

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# ❄️ Cold Open — "Doctor Suhroja"

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# ❄️ Cold Open — "Doctor Suhroja"

5 panels · before the title

C.1 Boys H.Q, morning. Suraj on the sofa under a blanket, damp cloth on his forehead placed by himself at an angle he chose. Mild fever, maximum production values.

Anudeep stands over him with a strip of tablets and a glass of water, entirely reasonable.

Anudeep Idi paracetamol. Teesuko.

C.2 Suraj turns his face away with the strength of a man refusing a lesser offer.

Suraj Vaddu.

Suraj Nuvvu Kicha daggara ki vellu. Doctor Saroja ni pilavamanu.

C.3 Anudeep's face. He does not ask who Doctor Saroja is. He has learned, over three months, that asking makes it longer.

He walks off-panel.

Anudeep (flat, off): Kicha. Doctor Saroja ni pilavamanta.

C.4 Kicha, in the kitchen, mid-bite. He stops chewing. He puts the plate down. Something happens behind his sunglasses that can only be described as vindication.

Keecha (quietly, to himself): Finally.

Keecha Ippatiki time vachindi.

C.5 A door. Kicha steps out — white bedsheet as an apron, folded paper cap, phone cable arranged as a stethoscope, sunglasses still on. One tablet on a small steel plate, carried at chest height like a surgical tray.

Total commitment. No trace of a smile.

Keecha Patient. Doctor Saroja vachindi.

Suraj's face: absolute, unguarded joy.

Caption (title): Samanloo

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# ▸ Act One — Two Houses · panels 1 to 16

## Page One

1. Twenty minutes later. Anudeep at the table with the list — his handwriting, ruled columns, forty items. Jay beside him, dressed, holding borrowed car keys.

Anudeep Forty items. Route kuda plan chesa.

Jay Sare.

2. Aishwarya comes over the rail, still in work clothes, straight from a site visit.

S.F.X: thmp.

Aishwarya Rendu gantalu naa daggara undi. Tarvata site ki malli vellali.

(She will not go to the site.)

3. Anudeep looks past them at the sofa.

Anudeep Meeru randi ra.

4. Reverse. Suraj, blanket to the chin, magnificent. Kicha beside him in full costume, arms folded.

Suraj Nenu raalenu.

Keecha Doctor Saroja bed rest advise chesindi.

Suraj (nodding slowly) Doctor cheppindi.

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## Page Two

5. The door closes.

S.F.X: click.

6. Silence. Two men. One sofa. An entire day.

7. They look at each other.

8. Smash Cut — the living room, transformed. A hand-lettered card taped to the sofa arm: Ward 1 · Bed 1. A bucket. A hand-bell from somewhere. And hanging off the sofa frame, a patient chart, ruled by hand.*

Close on it. It is a page torn out of Kicha's Case File notebook. The old heading is still visible at the top, scratched out.

Caption (narration): It took them eleven minutes.

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## Page Three

9. Kicha at the foot of the sofa with the clipboard. Taking a reading with total gravity.

Keecha Temperature.

10. Close on Kicha's hands. He is not holding a thermometer. He is holding his phone.

He has the calculator open. He types 9 — 9 — . — 8.

11. He turns the screen around and shows it to Suraj like a diagnosis.

Keecha Ninety-nine point eight.

12. Suraj looks at the calculator. He accepts it completely. He becomes visibly weaker.

Suraj …ayyo.

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## Page Four

13. the Market. Wide. Noise, tarpaulin, three people in a crowd. Jay is already carrying everything. Nobody asked him to.

14. Anudeep with the list, calling items like a manifest.

Anudeep Suitcase. Twenty-three kilo. Hard shell.

Aishwarya Soft shell.

Anudeep Hard shell ra, adi—

Aishwarya Soft shell. Nenu ammuthanu kada, naaku telusu.

Anudeep Nuvvu flats ammuthav.

15. Aishwarya, already walking to another stall.

Aishwarya Andulo kuda saaman untundi.

16. Jay, behind them, buying the soft shell one without participating in the discussion.

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# ▸ Act Two — Ward 1 · panels 17 to 40

## Page Five

17. the Ward. Suraj, propped up, gravely:

Suraj Doctor. Naa heart rate enti?

18. Kicha holds up the phone again. This time it is a stock market app — a live candlestick chart, red and green, jagged, plunging.

19. He studies it for a long moment with professional concern.

Keecha …idi bagoledu.

20. Suraj, craning to see the screen, genuinely alarmed by a graph of the Nifty 50.

Suraj Adi enduku kindaki poyindi?!

Keecha Nuvvu ekkuva maatladuthunnav.

Suraj immediately stops talking.

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## Page Six

21. the Market. The plug debate. Anudeep holding two converters, presenting evidence.

Anudeep Idi Type B. Adi Type A. America lo rendu untayi. So—

Aishwarya So rendu konu.

Anudeep Rendu konte redundancy—

Aishwarya Rendu konu.

22. He buys both. She was right. He does not concede this aloud.

23. Jay, four bags now, watching them argue.

24. And for one panel — no dialogue — he almost smiles.

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## Page Seven

25. the Ward. Suraj demands a second opinion.

26. Kicha leaves frame. Returns having removed the paper cap and put on Anudeep's spare glasses. Same clipboard. That is the entire disguise.

Keecha (deeper): Namaskaram. Nenu senior doctor.

27. Suraj, with total sincerity, to a man he has lived with for four years:

Suraj Sir, Doctor Saroja sarigga cheppaledu.

Keecha (deeper): Aavida junior. Experience thakkuva.

28. A beat panel. Both men entirely serious. The bedsheet has slipped off one shoulder.

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## Page Eight

29. A key in the door. Muddamma. She takes in the ward — the sign, the chart, the bell, the bedsheet, the glasses, the clipboard.

30. She crosses the room without a word and delivers a mottikaya to Kicha's skull. Then, without pausing, one to Suraj's.

S.F.X: tok. · tok.

Keecha —ah!

Suraj —amma!

31. She points at the kitchen.

Mudamma Iddaru. Vellи thinandi. Ippude.

(Neither of them has eaten since morning. Neither of them noticed.)

32. Suraj, seizing the moment, clutches his chest and spits a mouthful of rooh afza into a tissue — bright, obviously red, obviously syrup.

Suraj (weakly, magnificent): Amma… naa kosam idi antha chesthunnara?

Close on Muddamma's face. She has raised four sons. She has never in her life been less impressed.

Mudamma …devuda.

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## Page Nine

33. the Market. Jay's phone rings. He looks at it slightly too long before answering.

34. He listens. Says four words. Hangs up.

Jay Office. Vellali.

35. He hands the four bags over — two to Anudeep, two to Aishwarya. It takes six seconds. There is no ceremony to it at all.

Anudeep Ippude? Nuvvu—

Jay Haan.

36. And he's gone into the crowd. Anudeep watches him go. Aishwarya watches Anudeep watch him go.

Two people and a list.

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## Page Ten

37. the Market, Later. Something has changed and nobody announced it. The list is in Aishwarya's hand now.

38. It has become easy. They are not shopping efficiently any more. They are just walking.

39. She buys him something not on the list. He doesn't notice her paying for it.

40. the Ward, Intercut — and something has changed here too.

Suraj is lying back with a pillow shoved up under the blanket. An enormous, absurd, perfectly round belly.

Kicha is standing at the foot of the sofa with rolled-up sleeves and a towel over one arm, looking at it with grave professional focus.

Neither of them has explained how the cold became this.

---

# ▸ Act Three — the Coffee · panels 41 to 52

## Page Eleven

41. A small coffee place. Late afternoon. Six bags around their feet, taking up more room than the table. Both wrecked.

42. Neither of them says anything for a panel. It isn't awkward. It's the end of a long day.

43. And then she asks it. Not carefully — she's too tired to be careful, which is the only reason it comes out at all.

Aishwarya Asala U.S.A enduku ra?**

44. He doesn't deflect. It comes out organised, because he has rehearsed it. Not for her. For himself.

Anudeep Ikkada kuda career build cheyyochu. Nijam.

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## Page Twelve

45. Anudeep Ma family lo first masters grad nenu avuthanu. Adi kuda undi.

46. Anudeep Kaani ikkade unte… nenu slack avuthanu ra. Naaku telusu naa gurinchi.

Anudeep Ikkada comfortable ga untundi. Comfortable ante — nenu aagipotanu.

47. Anudeep Akkada growth opportunities ekkuva. Nenu progress avuthunnanu ani feel avuthundi.

Anudeep Technically debt lo untanu. Chala. Kaani… feel avuthundi.

48. He runs out. Looks at the table, slightly embarrassed at having said all of it out loud.

Anudeep Adi… adi konchem thakkuva reason la undha?

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## Page Thirteen

49. Close on Aishwarya.

Aishwarya Ledu.

It's true. She means it. It is the worst possible answer for her.

50. — the Silence —

She looks at him. He doesn't notice, because he's still looking at the table.

(No dialogue. No caption.)

51. She picks up her cup. Puts it down without drinking. Picks it up again.

(No dialogue.)

52. Wide, from outside the window. Two people at a table, six bags, one of them talking about a converter plug again and one of them not hearing a word of it.

(No dialogue.)

---

# ▸ Act Four — the Delivery · panels 53 to 64

## Page Fourteen

53. She straightens in the chair. Decision made. She is not going to say it.

54. And then, quietly, from across the table:

Anudeep Okati cheptha. Em anukoku.

55. Her entire system stops. Eleven weeks arrive at once.

Aishwarya Haan. Cheppu.

Beat.

Aishwarya —wait. Asala em cheppaku.

56. Anudeep, completely confused. From where he's sitting, nothing has happened.

Anudeep …cheppana, vaddha?

Aishwarya (not looking at him) …cheppu.

Anudeep Naa card close chesestharu ra. So ee bill—

She is already standing.

Aishwarya Vadu. Fine. Nenu kadutha.

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## Page Fifteen

57. Boys H.Q, night. The door opens. Bags first, then the two of them — and they walk straight into it.*

58. Wide. The living room mid-procedure. Suraj flat on the sofa, belly enormous, gripping a cushion, roaring. Kicha at the foot of the sofa, sleeves up, towel over his arm, coaching.*

Keecha Push cheyyi. Push.

Suraj Nenu cheyyalekapothunna

Keecha Nuvvu strong ra. Nenu chusanu.

59. Anudeep and Aishwarya in the doorway. Bags still in their hands. Neither of them moves.

60. the Delivery. Kicha reaches under the blanket with tremendous ceremony and produces — a balloon. White, tied, drawn on with a face.

He holds it up in both hands, at arm's length, in the classic posture.

Keecha (to the ceiling, triumphant): Doctor Suhroja finally tana first baby delivery chesindi!**

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## Page Sixteen

61. He crosses the room and, with great solemnity, places the balloon into Aishwarya's arms.

She takes it. She is still holding two shopping bags. Her face is doing nothing at all.

62. And before anyone can speak — Kicha reaches back under the blanket and produces a second balloon. He hands it to Anudeep.

Keecha Meeku twins.

63. Anudeep, delighted, phone already out.

the Photo: Suraj propped on the sofa with the pillow still under the blanket, exhausted and radiant. Kicha beside him, towel over the arm, sunglasses on. Aishwarya holding a balloon. A new family portrait, taken by the one person not in it.

S.F.X: click.

64. Wide. Everyone talking at once.

And Aishwarya — not looking at anyone, entirely nonchalant, mid-conversation — closes her hand around the balloon.

S.F.X: Pop

A beat of total silence. Every head turns.

Keecha (genuinely stricken): …what a monster.

And the room breaks. All four of them, properly, helplessly — Suraj laughing so hard the pillow shifts, Anudeep bent double, Kicha holding his own chest.

# ❄️ COLD OPEN — "DOCTOR SAROJA"

# ❄️ Cold Open — "Doctor Suhroja"

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# ❄️ Cold Open — "Doctor Suhroja"

*5 panels · before the title*

C.1 *Boys H.Q, morning. Suraj on the sofa under a blanket, damp cloth on his forehead placed by himself at an angle he chose. Mild fever, maximum production values.*

*Anudeep stands over him with a strip of tablets and a glass of water, entirely reasonable.*

Anudeep Idi paracetamol. Teesuko.

C.2 *Suraj turns his face away with the strength of a man refusing a lesser offer.*

Suraj Vaddu.

Suraj Nuvvu Kicha daggara ki vellu. **Doctor Saroja ni pilavamanu.**

C.3 *Anudeep's face. He does not ask who Doctor Saroja is. He has learned, over three months, that asking makes it longer.*

*He walks off-panel.*

Anudeep *(flat, off)*: Kicha. Doctor Saroja ni pilavamanta.

C.4 *Kicha, in the kitchen, mid-bite. He stops chewing. He puts the plate down. Something happens behind his sunglasses that can only be described as vindication.*

Keecha *(quietly, to himself)*: **Finally.**

Keecha Ippatiki time vachindi.

C.5 *A door. Kicha steps out — white bedsheet as an apron, folded paper cap, phone cable arranged as a stethoscope, sunglasses still on. One tablet on a small steel plate, carried at chest height like a surgical tray.*

*Total commitment. No trace of a smile.*

Keecha Patient. **Doctor Saroja** vachindi.

*Suraj's face: absolute, unguarded joy.*

Caption (title): Samanloo

---

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# ▸ Act One — Two Houses · panels 1 to 16

## Page One

**1.** *Twenty minutes later. Anudeep at the table with the list — his handwriting, ruled columns, forty items. Jay beside him, dressed, holding borrowed car keys.*

Anudeep Forty items. Route kuda plan chesa.

Jay Sare.

**2.** *Aishwarya comes over the rail, still in work clothes, straight from a site visit.*

S.F.X: *thmp.*

Aishwarya Rendu gantalu naa daggara undi. Tarvata site ki malli vellali.

*(She will not go to the site.)*

**3.** *Anudeep looks past them at the sofa.*

Anudeep Meeru randi ra.

**4.** *Reverse. Suraj, blanket to the chin, magnificent. Kicha beside him in full costume, arms folded.*

Suraj Nenu **raalenu.**

Keecha Doctor Saroja bed rest advise chesindi.

Suraj *(nodding slowly)* Doctor cheppindi.

---

## Page Two

**5.** *The door closes.*

S.F.X: *click.*

**6.** *Silence. Two men. One sofa. An entire day.*

**7.** *They look at each other.*

**8.** Smash Cut — the living room, transformed. A hand-lettered card taped to the sofa arm: **Ward 1 · Bed 1.** A bucket. A hand-bell from somewhere. And hanging off the sofa frame, a patient chart, ruled by hand.*

*Close on it. It is a page torn out of Kicha's Case File notebook. The old heading is still visible at the top, scratched out.*

Caption *(narration)*: It took them eleven minutes.

---

## Page Three

**9.** *Kicha at the foot of the sofa with the clipboard. Taking a reading with total gravity.*

Keecha Temperature.

**10.** *Close on Kicha's hands. He is not holding a thermometer. He is holding his phone.*

*He has the **calculator** open. He types **9** — **9** — **.** — **8.***

**11.** *He turns the screen around and shows it to Suraj like a diagnosis.*

Keecha Ninety-nine point eight.

**12.** *Suraj looks at the calculator. He accepts it completely. He becomes visibly weaker.*

Suraj …ayyo.

---

## Page Four

**13.** *the Market. Wide. Noise, tarpaulin, three people in a crowd. Jay is already carrying everything. Nobody asked him to.*

**14.** *Anudeep with the list, calling items like a manifest.*

Anudeep Suitcase. Twenty-three kilo. Hard shell.

Aishwarya Soft shell.

Anudeep Hard shell ra, adi—

Aishwarya **Soft shell.** Nenu ammuthanu kada, naaku telusu.

Anudeep Nuvvu **flats** ammuthav.

**15.** *Aishwarya, already walking to another stall.*

Aishwarya Andulo kuda saaman untundi.

**16.** *Jay, behind them, buying the soft shell one without participating in the discussion.*

---

# ▸ Act Two — Ward 1 · panels 17 to 40

## Page Five

**17.** *the Ward. Suraj, propped up, gravely:*

Suraj Doctor. Naa **heart rate** enti?

**18.** *Kicha holds up the phone again. This time it is a **stock market app** — a live candlestick chart, red and green, jagged, plunging.*

**19.** *He studies it for a long moment with professional concern.*

Keecha …idi bagoledu.

**20.** *Suraj, craning to see the screen, genuinely alarmed by a graph of the Nifty 50.*

Suraj Adi enduku **kindaki** poyindi?!

5 panels · before the title

C.1 Boys H.Q, morning. Suraj on the sofa under a blanket, damp cloth on his forehead placed by himself at an angle he chose. Mild fever, maximum production values.

Anudeep stands over him with a strip of tablets and a glass of water, entirely reasonable.

C.2 Suraj turns his face away with the strength of a man refusing a lesser offer.

Suraj Nuvvu Kicha daggara ki vellu. Doctor Saroja ni pilavamanu.

C.3 Anudeep's face. He does not ask who Doctor Saroja is. He has learned, over three months, that asking makes it longer.

He walks off-panel.

Anudeep (flat, off): Kicha. Doctor Saroja ni pilavamanta.

C.4 Kicha, in the kitchen, mid-bite. He stops chewing. He puts the plate down. Something happens behind his sunglasses that can only be described as vindication.

Keecha (quietly, to himself): Finally.

C.5 A door. Kicha steps out — white bedsheet as an apron, folded paper cap, phone cable arranged as a stethoscope, sunglasses still on. One tablet on a small steel plate, carried at chest height like a surgical tray.

Total commitment. No trace of a smile.

Keecha Patient. Doctor Saroja vachindi.

Suraj's face: absolute, unguarded joy.

1. Twenty minutes later. Anudeep at the table with the list — his handwriting, ruled columns, forty items. Jay beside him, dressed, holding borrowed car keys.

2. Aishwarya comes over the rail, still in work clothes, straight from a site visit.

S.F.X: thmp.

(She will not go to the site.)

3. Anudeep looks past them at the sofa.

4. Reverse. Suraj, blanket to the chin, magnificent. Kicha beside him in full costume, arms folded.

Suraj Nenu raalenu.

Suraj (nodding slowly) Doctor cheppindi.

5. The door closes.

S.F.X: click.

6. Silence. Two men. One sofa. An entire day.

7. They look at each other.

8. Smash Cut — the living room, transformed. A hand-lettered card taped to the sofa arm: Ward 1 · Bed 1. A bucket. A hand-bell from somewhere. And hanging off the sofa frame, a patient chart, ruled by hand.*

Close on it. It is a page torn out of Kicha's Case File notebook. The old heading is still visible at the top, scratched out.

Caption (narration): It took them eleven minutes.

9. Kicha at the foot of the sofa with the clipboard. Taking a reading with total gravity.

10. Close on Kicha's hands. He is not holding a thermometer. He is holding his phone.

He has the calculator open. He types 9 — 9 — . — 8.

11. He turns the screen around and shows it to Suraj like a diagnosis.

12. Suraj looks at the calculator. He accepts it completely. He becomes visibly weaker.

13. the Market. Wide. Noise, tarpaulin, three people in a crowd. Jay is already carrying everything. Nobody asked him to.

14. Anudeep with the list, calling items like a manifest.

Aishwarya Soft shell. Nenu ammuthanu kada, naaku telusu.

Anudeep Nuvvu flats ammuthav.

15. Aishwarya, already walking to another stall.

16. Jay, behind them, buying the soft shell one without participating in the discussion.

17. the Ward. Suraj, propped up, gravely:

Suraj Doctor. Naa heart rate enti?

18. Kicha holds up the phone again. This time it is a stock market app — a live candlestick chart, red and green, jagged, plunging.

19. He studies it for a long moment with professional concern.

20. Suraj, craning to see the screen, genuinely alarmed by a graph of the Nifty 50.

Suraj Adi enduku kindaki poyindi?!

Suraj immediately stops talking.

21. the Market. The plug debate. Anudeep holding two converters, presenting evidence.

Aishwarya Rendu konu.

22. He buys both. She was right. He does not concede this aloud.

23. Jay, four bags now, watching them argue.

24. And for one panel — no dialogue — he almost smiles.

25. the Ward. Suraj demands a second opinion.

26. Kicha leaves frame. Returns having removed the paper cap and put on Anudeep's spare glasses. Same clipboard. That is the entire disguise.

Keecha (deeper): Namaskaram. Nenu senior doctor.

27. Suraj, with total sincerity, to a man he has lived with for four years:

Keecha (deeper): Aavida junior. Experience thakkuva.

28. A beat panel. Both men entirely serious. The bedsheet has slipped off one shoulder.

29. A key in the door. Muddamma. She takes in the ward — the sign, the chart, the bell, the bedsheet, the glasses, the clipboard.

30. She crosses the room without a word and delivers a mottikaya to Kicha's skull. Then, without pausing, one to Suraj's.

S.F.X: tok. · tok.

31. She points at the kitchen.

Mudamma Iddaru. Vellи thinandi. Ippude.

(Neither of them has eaten since morning. Neither of them noticed.)

32. Suraj, seizing the moment, clutches his chest and spits a mouthful of rooh afza into a tissue — bright, obviously red, obviously syrup.

Suraj (weakly, magnificent): Amma… naa kosam idi antha chesthunnara?

Close on Muddamma's face. She has raised four sons. She has never in her life been less impressed.

33. the Market. Jay's phone rings. He looks at it slightly too long before answering.

34. He listens. Says four words. Hangs up.

35. He hands the four bags over — two to Anudeep, two to Aishwarya. It takes six seconds. There is no ceremony to it at all.

36. And he's gone into the crowd. Anudeep watches him go. Aishwarya watches Anudeep watch him go.

Two people and a list.

37. the Market, Later. Something has changed and nobody announced it. The list is in Aishwarya's hand now.

38. It has become easy. They are not shopping efficiently any more. They are just walking.

39. She buys him something not on the list. He doesn't notice her paying for it.

40. the Ward, Intercut — and something has changed here too.

Suraj is lying back with a pillow shoved up under the blanket. An enormous, absurd, perfectly round belly.

Kicha is standing at the foot of the sofa with rolled-up sleeves and a towel over one arm, looking at it with grave professional focus.

Neither of them has explained how the cold became this.

41. A small coffee place. Late afternoon. Six bags around their feet, taking up more room than the table. Both wrecked.